Onion Daydream

Posted by Mark on October 22, 2009 in Poetry, ReWrites, ReadWritePoem
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Not the prompt, but a rewrite of an old poem from the stacks of other old poems decid­edly in need of a rewrite. ——-Onion Day­dream The onion bleed­sJuices flow­ing like syrupStrug­gling uphill along the Vena Cava way.Peat moss        rot­tingMor­ph­ing into a car­cassOf unbe­liev­able delights.A room dimly lighted by     a touch of bright fireShed­ding darkness […]

Sasha — Another Consumption

Posted by Mark on September 28, 2009 in Poetry, ReWrites
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Process Notes: “Sasha” is how I view poetry.  In other words, if you think “poetry/writing/poetics” when­ever you see ‘Sasha’ you’ll have a bet­ter idea of where I’m going with this .  And I would love to take credit for this idea, but I can’t.  It’s a total (with per­mis­sion) swipe of a series of poems […]

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Chum Humming Goats or The Larynx that Loved Laredo (rewrite 7/29)

Posted by Mark on July 29, 2009 in Poetry, ReWrites, ReadWritePoem
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A Rewrite of the Read Write Poem #84 Chum Hum­ming Goats or The Lar­ynx that Loved Laredo My chum Char­lie recently Released from incar­cer­a­tion Had a clammy hand­shake A curi­ous coun­ter­point to Lar­ce­nous heat that sought To divvy up every­thing that Wasn’t his; to enrich him­self Fleece from the ether some Bit of fluff that com­prised all About. He […]

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