3WW CLXII — #12
Posted by Mark on November 4, 2009 in Uncategorized | Subscribe
Taking some time out of NaNoWriMo to write something a tad different. And a welcome reprieve it is. No title this time.
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Karma is humbug to
the inconclusive
The paranoid muse will
obey the capricious
But only on Thursday
and never at dusk
To diverge is to wither
Shingles slowly rotting
to laughing regret
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Thanks for reading!
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Great words. I liked this. And good luck with NaNoWriMo. Novel writing certainly takes it out of you.
“Only on thursday..”
Hmm. Sometimes not even then!
flames of karma
Wow, Mark, I really dig this. There’s a realism to this that’s just excellent.
(Luck on the novel. With all that has happened since September, I decided not to do it this year. Still trying to get my head right, man.)
Obey
Wow, Mark, I really dig this. There’s a realism to this that’s just excellent.
(Luck on the novel. With all that has happened since September, I decided not to do it this year. Still trying to get my head right, man.)
Obey
WOW. A+ for originality.
I’m well familiar with the “paranoid muse’. I liked the italicized bits especially.
I love the italics bit! <3 <3 <3
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I am an angry triangle! With a monocle!
Deep and thought-provoking. You are very good at this.
interesting, like the ‘only on Thursday’ piece — also — to diverge is to wither– very good
that was really brilliant!
Good luck with NaNoWriMo!!! Keep going.… you are great at it!
This one is mysterious and full of character… The rotting shingles make a nice final touch.
Excellent!
This one is full of thought provoking intangibles. Nice one!
I like the last line, there’s something casual and ernest about the whole piece
& go luck with NaNo!
I liked this, I sensedmore a fatalistic element to it all.
Thanks for stopping by my new blog, fellow NaNowriter!
EX-CE-LLENT!
But only on Thursdays and never at dusk
Excellent…wow!
Brilliant, so clever!!!