Tender Mercy #21

Posted by Mark on July 6, 2010 in Drafts, Poetry, Tender Mercy | Subscribe

Let’s go throw all the songs we know
into the sea and

blend them with just out of reach
ocean rhythms and

time breaks singing in a resur­gent
hiss and lap ebb

and flow as the songs we know
slid­ing off the sandbar

slowly float out to sea only to
return with the tides

I read the first line of this on a Last.fm page, and was inspired…Who knew it was a song by The Cure?  This is another in the Ten­der Mercy series which is grow­ing sort of like poetic kudzu.

3 Comments

  • Marsha says:

    Just when I think all the words I’ll ever love have already been writ­ten, you go and pen this… this delight­ful thing. It is my new favorite love.

  • RadioNowhere says:

    You hum­ble me with your praise, Marsha…

  • James says:

    I like that Cure song and really like where you took it, throw­ing a song I know into the sea and com­ing up with some­thing new and wonderful.

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