Big Tent Poetry (7/30/10) — The Lizard King
The idea this week is to write a poem about an icon, hero or personality and what might be different. Jim Morrison is dead. I wondered what he might be about were that not the case.
I leave it to you to determine how successful I was with this weeks prompt or not. In the meantime, you can see how others responded by looking here.
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The Lizard King
Would you still be peddling the leather clad
Dionysus shaman act, with hairline in retreat
Your shirt still unbuttoned down to there?
Would your sulky eyes be tightened up
from trips to the plastic supplier? Would
you still wake up in the morning and
Get yourself a beer or love her madly?
Even though you walked on out that
door, eternally young?
Would you still be selling yourself as a guide
through the labyrinth or still dreaming of killing
your father?
Are you now living in the company of
gods or are you just gone?
Would you still be daring infinity to answer
your knock or drowning in the new wine
you were searching for?
Where are you now? Where were you
then? No one here gets out alive
is a book; though some thought you did.
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I like the way you use your imagination in this poem.
Last line: though or thought?
Thanks Viv…and I fixed that last line.…I swear I need an editor.
Great, imaginative, and thought-provoking…
Thanks, Cynthia!
Great work, Mark! This one I’ll share with my husband. Our bathroom is a tribute to the Doors. ha! Thank you for sharing.. .. I love it madly.
The idea of a bathroom being a Doors tribute is somehow fitting.…
Glad you enjoyed it.
Sexy. Like Jim Morrison. Very good.
Mark nice take on the prompt!
Pamela
Thanks. This just sprang to mind…then the work began.
I like it, especially the first nine lines. The rhythm is as good as the words are.
Thanks, Steve! I know what a fan you are.…
I didn’t get the subject until I read the comments; re-reading it with the knowledge made it more enjoyable. Just had another look and of course it is in the title! Just a little bit before my time.
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Have a much younger friend who went through a Morrison period (talking about him a lot), so your poem made a great deal of sense to me and I really like that last stanza, especially.
Elizabeth
Eternally young– that’s so true.
“Where are you now? Where were you
then?”
What a great second question. Loved it!
well pollished Mark.….thanks for sharing your words
Love the questions which are in themselves the answers. A lovely write, full of life and what if’s.